Divine Lucky Star

Chapter 136

Oh, such a warm-hearted female book friend, we are all embarrassed

Didi, private chat message rings again --

how many flowers fall in the dream: "handsome boy, do you want to send it?"

Wang Ritan: "it's just

Wang Ritan: "speak to others!"

How many flowers in the dream know: "I wrote yesterday, and I finally wrote all the information you asked for, but I couldn't get a chapter in it! It took more than 8000 words to write all these things out! "

Wang Ritan: "it's just

How many flowers in the dream know: "you look at the writing first!"

Taking the dream of flowers know how many hair to the beginning, Wang Hao carefully looked up.

To be honest, this guy is very simple and capable. In many places, a few short paragraphs depict the scene in a very three-dimensional way, which is very picturesque.

Unfortunately, it's a bit wordy.

Wang Ritan: "the overall plot is OK, and the picture sense is good, but it's still wordy. You try to remove the useless places. In addition, the connection between the plot and the plot is more natural. You see, you used more than 1000 words for each of the elements I told you last time. You used more than 300 words to describe the site at the beginning. This is totally unnecessary. This part is just a summary. Just say the name of high school. Readers will naturally find out what high school looks like

How many flowers in the dream know: "Oh, it seems that we still need to practice well, handsome boy, you are very handsome when you talk about books, do you need to warm up the bed?"

Wang RI Tian: "go away!"

How many flowers in the dream know: "ha ha, blush?"

Wang Ritan: "don't talk nonsense! What about time, place, people, events? In fact, the time and place can be more than a hundred words. Students need not say too much about this part. The key lies in the introduction of the world background. Because it is a battle scene, you need to describe the powerful monsters and the anti heaven strength of the strong human beings, so as to stimulate the readers' sense of expectation. "

How many flowers in the dream know: "well, is there any more?"

Wang Ritan: "there's nothing else. You can change this part to about 5000 words, and then I'll tell you about the plot and setting."

How many flowers in the dream know: "I'm going to change it, moo Moda handsome boy!"

About an hour later, Hualuo knew how many times she had written in her dream and showed her the revised manuscript to Wang Hao. This time it turned out to be much better. What should be explained was almost done. Wang Hao nodded with satisfaction.

Wang RI Tian: "this time is good. OK, I'll give you the settings at the back. Well, by the way, my settings in this book are very comprehensive, including various characters, grades, plot development and so on. If it is well written, it can be sure that it will be a big fire! But let's talk about it in advance. You said to write a thousand words and give me fifteen, right? "

How many flowers in the dream know: "of course, handsome boy, I take care of you!"

Wang RI Tian: "roll thick! I'd rather die than surrender! "

Dream flowers know how many: "sooner or later you will bow down in my mother's skirt!"

Wang Ritan: "it's just

Don't quarrel with this goods, Wang Hao summed up the outline of "swallow up the starry sky" written before to the dream of flowers and flowers know how many hair in the past.

This outline is the one Bai Yaning has seen before, which is very comprehensive.

How many flowers in my dream do you know

The flowers in the dream know how many: "lying trough, you set the plot of what is simply too strong, I really have a vision!"

Wang RI Tian: "what are you going to do

Dream flowers know how many: "dry, strive to write 20000 words a day!"

Wang Ritan: "it's just

Lying trough, one thousand words fifteen, twenty thousand words a day, that's 300 yuan!

Wang Ritan: "don't mention it. It's 12000 a day. Guarantee the quality is the premise. Don't rush to gather the number of words!"

How many flowers fall in the dream: "it makes sense! Worthy of my destiny! Handsome boy, come to me when you have time ~ ~ "

Wang RI Tian:" go to death, Ge Ning will not follow! "

"Ding Lingling --"

turn off QQ and look at the news on the Internet. Suddenly, the mobile phone rings and looks at the caller ID

Zhao Zhenhao actually called. What is the situation?

When we had dinner yesterday, they still left a phone. At least they gave us a famous watch. If we didn't leave any contact information, it would be unkind, right?

"What's the situation, Lao Zhao?" After last night's game of poker, the relationship between the two people is still said in the past. After connecting Wang Hao, he said with a smile: "what's the matter? Can I help you? "

Zhao Zhenhao restored that kind of magnetic voice again: "think of you, call to ask."

So polite? The play is not right.

You should think about ice princess star?

Wang Hao: "so concerned about me? Don't be polite to me. Tell me, what's the matter

"Well," Zhao Zhenhao said, "I'd like to invite you to dinner. Are you free?"Damn it, it's eating again. What kind of routine is that?

"Well, it's OK to have nothing for the time being," Wang Hao thought, and then asked, "just us?"

"Yes, just the two of us," Zhao Zhenhao said with a smile. "It's a casual meal. I know a very good French restaurant. Let's have some?"

Wang Hao pondered for a moment. Zhao Zhenhao could not help but ask, "OK, Cheng, where can I find you?"

Zhao Zhenhao said: "you send me a position, I'll pick you up."

It's a shuttle bus again, good.

Wang Hao immediately sent his position in the past, and soon Zhao Zhenhao replied, "OK, I'll be there in 20 minutes."

Out of the cast, Wang Hao had just waited for about 20 minutes when he saw a black Jaguar coming in, which was Lao Zhao.

"What can I do for you?" Wang Hao opened the door of the car and sat on it. He asked with a smile, "I'm not going to kidnap me, and then ask something messy?"

"How can it be," Zhao Zhenhao said with a smile, "you are very important in Miss Yaning's heart. I will only trouble you if my brain burns out. Get in the car. It's already set up over there. "

"OK," Wang Hao got into the car and said, "Oh, I'm sorry to eat and drink with you all the time."

Well, if you really want to give me something good, I won't be polite, hehe.

"You are welcome." Zhao Zhenhao laughed and started the car.

Wang Hao's home is located in the South Third Ring Road of Zhonghai city. Generally speaking, it's also the center of the city. So it didn't take long to get to a western restaurant named Paris fashion. When they arrived, a row of luxury cars had been parked at the door. The local level of Lao Zhao Xuan was high!

This time, without Bai Yaning, Wang Hao finally knew how charming Zhao Zhenhao was!

It's worthy of being a tough version of song Zhongji's oba. As soon as he appeared, the girls who were eating in the western restaurant turned their heads in unison. Their eyes were as bright as 200 Watt headlights!

"Look, look! Handsome boy! God, you see how charming he is

"My God, it's so handsome. I I can't do it

"It's master Zhao Zhenhao of the Zhao family! He's here

who is the woodlouse behind him? Is it Zhao's eldest son? "

Listening to the whispers around him, Zhao Zhenhao also smiles and waves his hands occasionally. In an instant, Wang Hao follows him and looks like his little brother!

The script is not right, NIMA! You're the main character template, right?!

"That's it," Zhao Zhenhao took Wang Hao to an empty table and sat down. He said with a smile, "yesterday I went home and thought about it again. I think it's necessary for us to get to know each other again."

After saying this, Zhao Zhenhao held out his hand first: "Zhao Zhenhao, 25 years old, is the only son of Zhao Changsheng, a collateral branch of the Zhao family, and currently runs an Internet technology company."

"Hello, Hello," Wang Hao reached out his hand and shook him with a smile and said, "Wang Hao, 24 years old, works as a part-time worker in a production crew."

With such an introduction, the difference between the two suddenly seems to be as big as a pheasant and a Phoenix

"In fact, I invited you here to have a good talk with you and apologize to you." Zhao Zhenhao did not say anything about this, but he was quite calm: "I did have some caution when I gave you that Omega watch for dinner last night. I didn't hide it. I had some hostility to you before I went yesterday, so the price of that watch was 444000. This is really my Faux pas. Please forgive me."

He stood up and bowed solemnly to Wang Hao as an apology.

As soon as those girls around saw the scene, they were frying on the spot!

"No?! What is the identity of that young man? Can you ask Mr. Zhao to apologize to him? "

"My God, am I awake today? What's going on here? Is the sky falling? "

"There must be something strange today. The Zhao eldest son of Zhao family would apologize to someone!"